The Otter Class Blog

The Crashing Waves

The surfers are waiting eagerly like a bird watching it’s prey.
Suddenly an enormous tunnelling wave grabs them like a giant’s fist.
The excited surfers start to bob in the waves
Starting to stand up above the world.
The crashing waves slaughter the surfers.
The shimmering, ice blue waves settle as the gleaming
burning sun goes down.
The surfers carry on surfing in the warm sea by the moon light.
Not worried about the time. Not worried about anything.
People leave but the surfers carry on.

By Becky

The ice cold waves
wash me into the distance,
like a bird gliding,
silently,
further and further,
until nothing can be seen,
but a crashing sea,
glimmering like a crystal
in the scorching sun.

By Stevie

Surfers

The sea sucks up the surfers
and then spits them back out
like a giant sponge.

One of the surfers fell off his board
like a shark jumping out of the water.

Another dived under the wave
like a seal showing off.

They surf on the waves
and almost get trapped
by the cage-like wave,
And finally they go home.

By Jonas

We’ll keep them here for a little while because they are so good!